Comments on: This is my essay which I’ve just completed. Please correct my faults if you can. Thank so much !? http://prographicsprinting.com/printing/how-to-choose-a-printer/this-is-my-essay-which-ive-just-completed-please-correct-my-faults-if-you-can-thank-so-much/ Prographics Printing - Personal service in an impersonal age Sun, 29 Aug 2010 21:37:40 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: MO http://prographicsprinting.com/printing/how-to-choose-a-printer/this-is-my-essay-which-ive-just-completed-please-correct-my-faults-if-you-can-thank-so-much/comment-page-1/#comment-1276 MO Tue, 27 Jul 2010 09:36:08 +0000 http://prographicsprinting.com/printing/how-to-choose-a-printer/this-is-my-essay-which-ive-just-completed-please-correct-my-faults-if-you-can-thank-so-much/#comment-1276 Just reading the first 3 lines, you have a lot of mistakes. First of, you can't start off a sentence with "so." It's too long for me to type word for word what you need to correct. What I suggest is for you to read it out loud maybe once or twice and fix whatever doesn't sound right. Take out the "almost" in the first sentence, unless it was meant to say "almost all companies." That should start you off. Good Luck :) Just reading the first 3 lines, you have a lot of mistakes. First of, you can’t start off a sentence with "so." It’s too long for me to type word for word what you need to correct. What I suggest is for you to read it out loud maybe once or twice and fix whatever doesn’t sound right.

Take out the "almost" in the first sentence, unless it was meant to say "almost all companies." That should start you off. Good Luck :)

]]> By: DG http://prographicsprinting.com/printing/how-to-choose-a-printer/this-is-my-essay-which-ive-just-completed-please-correct-my-faults-if-you-can-thank-so-much/comment-page-1/#comment-1277 DG Tue, 27 Jul 2010 09:36:08 +0000 http://prographicsprinting.com/printing/how-to-choose-a-printer/this-is-my-essay-which-ive-just-completed-please-correct-my-faults-if-you-can-thank-so-much/#comment-1277 Reread your work. There are many typos. Reread your work. There are many typos.

]]> By: Anne W http://prographicsprinting.com/printing/how-to-choose-a-printer/this-is-my-essay-which-ive-just-completed-please-correct-my-faults-if-you-can-thank-so-much/comment-page-1/#comment-1278 Anne W Tue, 27 Jul 2010 09:36:08 +0000 http://prographicsprinting.com/printing/how-to-choose-a-printer/this-is-my-essay-which-ive-just-completed-please-correct-my-faults-if-you-can-thank-so-much/#comment-1278 i am not finishing this because you started off with "nowadays" which i dont think is a word and i consider unprofessional. fix it. i am not finishing this because you started off with "nowadays" which i dont think is a word and i consider unprofessional. fix it.

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